Tuesday, November 18, 2014

A Cold Mess

Zoe sent in this catastrophic sign from Kelowna, British Columbia.



The errant apostrophe in "resumes" is one of several punctuation issues on this sign. How many others can you count?

Thanks, Zoe!


2 comments:

Shelagh Kuse said...

Hyphen in self-serve, period between team and send, remove unnecessary quotation marks around Peachwave Kelowna. Can't read the red script at the bottom but suspect more comma splices.

Anonymous said...

"It's healthy, it's delicious, it's fun!"

Pat, I'd like to buy a couple of periods.